TarThoron's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Bacon Factory]

hypnotising

I'm not sure why, but i watched this far longer than I normally would a 3 second loop. Were there any special pigs after 500? I watched up to 600 and didn't see any more.

scottmale24 responds:

There's the Doom inviso-demon pig at 750 and the terrifying pig at 1000.

Past that, I just gave up.

[Cap]

nice

It is technicly a cap. If the brim went all the way around, or there was no brim at all, then it would have been "just a hat".

SergeantLedge responds:

...I know.


That's the point.

[The Nintendo Jazz Band]

It's ok...

There were lots of errors though.

1. Whenever it showed the whole stage, DK didnt move at all, despite the precence of drums and cymbols in the music.
2. Luigi was standing on the wrong side of the piano. The keyboard is on the flat side of a grand piano, the side that faced the camera in this case.
3. You showed Luigi playing piano when the instrument playing a solo was something like an oboe or some other low pitched horn. The closest thing you had on stage was Starfox and his bass, so you should have shown him instead.
4. Conker's solo section had very little trumpet in it, it was mostly xylophone or organ.
5. I'm pretty sure the insruments playing when you showed only the Toads wernt saxophones, but at least they were a horn of some type.
6. You didnt list Dr. Mario playing the Organ on the title screen, but that's a pretty minor thing.

Those are the obvious things that I noticed watching it twice. There are other more minor ones, but I'm not gonna nit-pic that much.

On a positive note, your drawings of the characters are pretty good, although I'm not to sure of your Mario. Your animation, while mainly tweens and/or angle morphs, are well done and quite smooth. The song is a good choice and came through with a very nice quality.

I hope to see more, and better, stuff out of you later.
Keep up the good work.

P.S. I think this is the longest review I've ever done. ^.^

[Banana Fingers EP.4]

nice parody

no mention of sinefeld in the credits, but thats only an issue if someone who cares watches.

I found one thing that turned my cursor into a hand like a link would, but it didnt apeer to do anything.

[The Failures - Episode 2]

...

you ripped off a cell phone comercial, but its still funny, and well done.

AntiClockClock responds:

Thats the point... It's a parody.

[TTA Opening Movie]

quite nice

glad to see that you are adding more original artwork rather then sprites. (even if the sprites are original, this kind of stuff looks better)

I look forward to episode 12 and beyond

[Smash Bros DX]

Not sure what you changed from the last time...

...but you made it through this time. Congrats on getting the first chapter through. Now you can worry about the next one.

BloodEagle responds:

i take that as a good review...i think

[Worms - Knock em off]

very nice

some more varity in what they say would be nice, but its good as is

this would make a great game

[Kill Mileena]

whats the name of that song?

[Ido Ido Ido]

could use more

at least this one has a conclusion.

an alternitive to more scenes would be to have the music fade out early, which would be better then having the final screen sit there waiting for the song to end.

navahl999 responds:

yeah i tried that but it really didnt make a difference...